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	<title>Comments on: Use Bullets to Write Better</title>
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		<title>By: Sally, Snappy Sentences</title>
		<link>http://www.snobs.com.au/2009/10/13/snappy-web-writing-bullets-are-your-best-friend/comment-page-1/#comment-1683</link>
		<dc:creator>Sally, Snappy Sentences</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Oct 2009 10:41:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Lisa
Thanks for your comments! Totally agree about how bullets &#039;up&#039; the importance of content items. People scan content when reading online. Bullets naturally break that flow - so lists are read. Definitely make sure they are worth reading.
Cheers
Sally</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Lisa<br />
Thanks for your comments! Totally agree about how bullets &#8216;up&#8217; the importance of content items. People scan content when reading online. Bullets naturally break that flow &#8211; so lists are read. Definitely make sure they are worth reading.<br />
Cheers<br />
Sally</p>
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		<title>By: Lisa O'Sullivan</title>
		<link>http://www.snobs.com.au/2009/10/13/snappy-web-writing-bullets-are-your-best-friend/comment-page-1/#comment-1680</link>
		<dc:creator>Lisa O'Sullivan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 05:52:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love bullets and get all manner of feedback from clients when I use them - esp. those who love the government/academic semi-colon approach.

In response to Bill - a one item list does not a list make. There&#039;s no need to bullet the sentence, just say it. (Unless it&#039;s a content treatment you&#039;re doing for a link at the bottom of a page or section, and you *really* want the user to see it.)

Another thing with lists - an issue I see as a delicate balance - is that sometimes you&#039;re making content look much more important than it is by using bullets (which draw the user&#039;s eye). So you really need to think before you bullet!

Yours in bullets.
:) Lisa</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love bullets and get all manner of feedback from clients when I use them &#8211; esp. those who love the government/academic semi-colon approach.</p>
<p>In response to Bill &#8211; a one item list does not a list make. There&#8217;s no need to bullet the sentence, just say it. (Unless it&#8217;s a content treatment you&#8217;re doing for a link at the bottom of a page or section, and you *really* want the user to see it.)</p>
<p>Another thing with lists &#8211; an issue I see as a delicate balance &#8211; is that sometimes you&#8217;re making content look much more important than it is by using bullets (which draw the user&#8217;s eye). So you really need to think before you bullet!</p>
<p>Yours in bullets.<br />
 <img src='http://www.snobs.com.au/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Lisa</p>
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		<title>By: Sally, Snappy Sentences</title>
		<link>http://www.snobs.com.au/2009/10/13/snappy-web-writing-bullets-are-your-best-friend/comment-page-1/#comment-1648</link>
		<dc:creator>Sally, Snappy Sentences</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Oct 2009 10:07:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Bill
Good points (pun intended).

I think if your sentences don&#039;t necessarily read well one after the other (and sub-headings aren’t appropriate), bullets are good to use because they indicate that the content shouldn&#039;t be read the same way as a paragraph. 

For instance you may be writing about pugs.

Little known facts about pugs 
•	Random fact.
•	Random fact.
•	Random fact.

In answer to your second question, I think you just have to make a judgement call on how it looks. If it keeps the rest of your page looking consistent, then go for it.  

Cheers, and thanks for the comment!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Bill<br />
Good points (pun intended).</p>
<p>I think if your sentences don&#8217;t necessarily read well one after the other (and sub-headings aren’t appropriate), bullets are good to use because they indicate that the content shouldn&#8217;t be read the same way as a paragraph. </p>
<p>For instance you may be writing about pugs.</p>
<p>Little known facts about pugs<br />
•	Random fact.<br />
•	Random fact.<br />
•	Random fact.</p>
<p>In answer to your second question, I think you just have to make a judgement call on how it looks. If it keeps the rest of your page looking consistent, then go for it.  </p>
<p>Cheers, and thanks for the comment!</p>
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		<title>By: Bill Harper</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bill Harper</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Oct 2009 01:45:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Agree with most of what you&#039;ve said, Sally. Bullet points are a great way to break up a mass of list items on a page.

A couple of questions:
- If you&#039;ve got a bullet point that&#039;s a complete sentence *without* a lead-in sentence (as you mention in your second bullet point here), why make it a bullet point at all? Why can&#039;t it just be a standard sentence?
- Should you use bullet points if there&#039;s just one item in the &quot;list&quot;?

Great work, Sally.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Agree with most of what you&#8217;ve said, Sally. Bullet points are a great way to break up a mass of list items on a page.</p>
<p>A couple of questions:<br />
- If you&#8217;ve got a bullet point that&#8217;s a complete sentence *without* a lead-in sentence (as you mention in your second bullet point here), why make it a bullet point at all? Why can&#8217;t it just be a standard sentence?<br />
- Should you use bullet points if there&#8217;s just one item in the &#8220;list&#8221;?</p>
<p>Great work, Sally.</p>
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